Pein's Magic

[Pein]

- Primary Magic -

Name: Lightning God Slayer
Type: Caster Lost Magic
Description: Lightning God Slayer Magic incorporates the element of lightning into the user's body, allowing them to produce black lightning from various parts of their body, which is mostly used for offensive purposes. Such distinctive "black lightning" possesses high voltage and great destructive power, and, much like that employed in standard Lightning Magic, can be generated in places away from the caster. The user is also granted the signature ability of the Slayer line to eat external sources of their element to heal themselves and regain power, thus making them have reduced damage to lightning; the Lightning God Slayer can even consume the lightning of the Lightning Dragon Slayer.

Through the use of Lightning God Slayer, the user can not only generate lightning from their body, but also make it appear from almost anywhere to strike their opponents, taking them by surprise. By generating electricity on different parts of their body, they are capable of making their attacks in melee deadlier, and of propelling themselves around to gain extra momentum. The bright light from the lightning can be also used to momentarily blind enemies. However, the spells of this magic can be redirected by metal objects acting as "lightning rods". In extreme cases, the user can utilize this lightning to restart the heart of a target, though in a weaker form.

The maximum power output of Lightning God Slayer Magic is around 1 million volts. The user, with this magic, is powerful enough to cause city-wide blackouts. Because of this enormous amount of power, the user constantly generates electrical fields that cause sensitive animals such as cats and dogs physical discomfort whenever they are near them. Also, because of this, the user can sense anything that approaches them when an object reflects the electromagnetic waves. The Lightning God Slayer Magic enables the user to turn their own body into lightning, in order to evade enemy attacks, move around at high speed and strike every opponent that crosses their path.

NOT USING 1 D-RANK, 2 C-RANK, and 2 B-RANK. WILL USE LATER.

Strengths:

• The user is able to control lightning. Their lightning is also stronger than normal lightning.
  
• The user can eat lightning, as a way to refuel themselves.

Weaknesses:

• Rock is still a powerful weakness. I.E. Earth Magic. It cannot conduct electricity, so lightning pretty much bounces off of it.
  
• Lightning Rods can absorb the techniques.
  
• There are many other things that can not conduct lightning, a few examples in plastic and cotton.

Passive Abilities:

• Pein releases an electrical field, that goes on for 15 yards. He can know when someone or something reflects off of the electromagnetic waves. This has a cooldown of 7 posts and a duration of 5 posts.
  
• Enhanced Endurance
  
• Resistance to lightning.

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- My Magic Skills -

D Rank:

C Rank:

B Rank:

A Rank:

S Rank:

X Rank:

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- Secondary Magic -

Name: Dark Écriture
Type: Caster Magic
Description: t is a form of Letter Magic that allows the caster to write runes, sometimes without a writing tool such as a pen or a quill,[1] for various types of effects. Essentially, the spells used for this Magic work only on what the caster writes with it; in other words, what they write goes as follows, making it a sort of "rule" in using Dark Écriture.
The properties of the magic is centered on the writing of the runes; however, if rewritten correctly, the effects will change. The runes can be written on an object, person, or even in midair for the effects to take place.

The runes can be written for different purposes, such as traps, and offensively can be cast upon an opponent to inflict either physical or mental injury. The caster can also conjure an element for usage of this Magic, like poison. Death is also a possible effect. However, simple usage of this Magic that is convenient for the user, such as teleportation or flight, can also be used. Another type of spell is actual transformation, in which the caster is able to transform themselves and be granted a different appearance, even strength.
Strengths: The user can do many things, by writing special runes.
Weaknesses: Very intelligent people can rewrite the runes. This will count more to rule spells, like blah blah in this are cannot blah blah.

- My Magic Skills -

Name: Teleport
Rank: C-Rank
Element:Dark Écriture
Description: The user seems to be able to teleport by turning themselves into many runes. These runes float in the air freely and go to the place where they unite to form the user's body again.
Strengths: Can teleport to anywhere they see.
Weaknesses: MUST be in the user's eyesight.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 5 posts

Name: Deathly Runes
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Teleport
Description: By writing runes in thin air, the user can reflect an incoming projectile.
Strengths: It can only reflect anything lower than B-Rank. Also, it can only reflect 3 D-Rank spells, or 2 C-Rank spells, or 1 B-Rank spell.
Weaknesses: Anything higher than A-Rank cannot be reflected.
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts

[Tempest]

I will review your magic app (considering I saw nobody did already^^).

First of all this statement isn't entirely true: "thus making them immune to lightning".
Its true you can eat lightning, however that doesn't make you completely immune to the element, considering if you got attacked with lightning and you didn't eat (for whatever reason) you can still be damaged by it (probably reduced, but still)

- Your "passive abilities are either separate spells, are things that need to be added you strength tab, so: Electric field is a spell; increased endurance, I'm a bit confused on why you have that; resistance to lightning would fall onder the strength tab.

- I also think your weakness tab falls a bit short, since their are more things that don't conduct electricity, like: Cotton, plastic, pure water etc.

As for you spell:

- Lightning God's Shadow: can you please give a range till where the skill is yet effective

- God of Lightning, 50 Volts: I'm assuming the piercing of 2 C-rank spells only applies when all 30 petals go at the same time?

- Lightning God's Bellow: aforementioned? Also, just like the one before, what is "Strong Shields?" in terms of rank?

- Lightning God's Lightning Bolt: Is that how high the sky is? (srry for the weird question, but isn't it better to simply mention that it can reach the ground from the sky? Also I'd say a B-rank skill can only pierce up to A-ranks shield, max and not just legendary shields.

- Lightning God's Force Field: When you say: "go through", do you mean the shield breaks?

- Lightning God's Secret Technique; God's Hammer: Shouldn't a added weakness be that it takes some time to summon a GOD.

- Lightning God's Secret Technique; 1 Million Volts: I noticed you missed the rank and element here. Does the weakness also count for when you stop the spell before the 2 posts.

- Teleport should be at least rank C.

- Instant Teleport: I'm a little confused about this one. Do you mean you can keep teleporting in between spots instantly, providing you have new vision after a first teleportation. 3 times was max then right?

Can you please look over these issues

[Mewtwo]

DONE BUMP~

[Ganz]

Only two things:

-Your passive force field needs duration and cooldown. Lower the range down to like 15 yards
-I would recommend 5 post duration and 7 post cooldown.

-Your last spell is a hint to powerful. Lower shock-damage to A-rank and duration to 1 post.

For your secondary:

-Raise cooldown of teleport to 5 posts. A teleport of C-rank is extremely powerful as you are not able to be attacked during the course of the teleportation.

[Mewtwo]

Done

[Ganz]

Even Elfman approves ~

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